This is a link to my second draft of the animation that I have made so far.
The opening scenes have all been laid out and completed ready to move on but the emotional explosions there after in the film have a few more frames that need adding to. For instance the laughter needs a few more changes and variety to the expressions and the bean drawings that I have need to be filled in.
There are lines that need more suggestion of perspective and refining. But that can come later when I decide to fill everything with colour.
The beginning few scenes are deliberately slow and uninteresting so that there is a proper build up to the explosions of anger. I'm relying a lot on the visuals to create most of the shouts and screams because sometimes there's more effect when you don't add sound to something. Your brain can make the sounds for you when you see something that you think ought to be loud.
I'm busy working on my blog posts. Watch this space!